Tayyaba

Pakistan

she/her
7-August -2003
17
"LEO"
"Got little space to fit in thoughts"
love: reading, writing, cooking, painting and travelling.
"Nature Lover "<33
ENFJ-T

Message from Writer

"Great things never come from comfort zones"

WORDS

September 22, 2020

FREE WRITING

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What do you think?
You are better than me.
When you let me down,
and criticize on me.
You do it twice,
I ignore it thrice.
When I touch the skies,
and see tears in your eyes.
you might have thought,
your words hurt me,
But you are the one,
who is getting on her knee.
I absolutely appreciate when some one supports me,  but i am literally allergic from criticism.

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7 Comments
  • Anlee

    "But you are the one,
    who is getting on her knee." woah. loving the subtle rhymes and rhythm <3


    about 1 month ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Nice rhymes!
    Re: thank you!


    2 months ago
  • Ferriswheel

    Loved this piece! Great rhythm and great flow. Btw thanks for the follow. :)


    2 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    I love this! It’s really good. It also has a lot of room for suggestion, which is nice.
    Replying: Yes! If everyone knew there was a God who is better...


    2 months ago
  • SunV

    This is amazing!


    2 months ago
  • -bellabean-

    Beautiful writing!!


    2 months ago
  • Currently Unavailable

    XD I AM ALLERGIC TO CRITICISM, TOO! It's probably because I'm an Advocate, which means I'm especially sensitive to criticism because I interpret it as a personal attack (is Brie Larson an Advocate, too?). Maybe you're an Advocate, too! Anyway, great piece! Very relatable! <3


    2 months ago