FantasyOtter12

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Love dystopian fiction!
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*Joined 7/6/20*
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~Always super grateful for peer feedback!!

~One of the three blind mice-->go check out jztpenguin and mindfruit, the other two :)

~WtW adopted by ze amazing Anne Blackwood ^-^

~ We're all going to die at some point. What matters is how you lived your life. ~ Mindfruit

~Currently reading: The 5th Wave (Rec. by dovetrees <3)

Online Learning and Internal Conversations

September 19, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Bold=One half of my brain        Italics=The other half of my brain

Act One Scene One

Shoot.
What did you do now??
The computer's at 4%. Use your eyes for once. Yeesh.
Go charge it then...
I left the charger in the kitchen.

Act One Scene Two

2%
There's still 5 minutes of class left though!!
Maybe the teacher will let us out early?
I know it's a new school but you should know better. She NEVER lets us out early.
Yea. So what do you suggest we do? 
Panick.
Ok.

Act Two Scene One

Stop laughing...c'mon its not THAT funny.
Omg-It's hilarious I cantttttttt
Stop stop STOP everyone's looking at us. Bite your tongue or something!
Ack ack ack its funny why can't I laughhh
You're going to get us into troub- (Gets in trouble) ....Happy now?

Act Two Scene Two

*Bursts out laughing after class*

Act Three Scene One

Can we try NOT to procrastinate for once..
We're off camera. Chill out for once.
So? We should still be working. It's due at the end of class!

Act Three Scene Two

Well at least we have extra practice at home..
Perfect. More homework because you wouldn't stop watching YouTube.
Hey well you were looking at MEMES!
Those were actually FUNNY and they took way less time than the 30 minute 'vlog' you were watching.
Hmph.
Hmph.

Act Four Scene One

*First day--
Should we turn the light on?
No, that makes you look creepy. Half of your face is lit and the other is dark.
But that's better than ALL dark.
Just leave the light off and open the curtain. Natural light.
But I don't wanna be one of those 'shrouded in mystery' people...
~(Indiscreet shoutout to Beth R.'s piece "ten types of students on zoom")~
Light off hurry up class is starting!!!
Light on stop turning it off!!!

Act Four Scene Two

Off 
On
Off 
On
Off 
On
*Class starts and you are seen flipping the light switch rapidly*

Act Five 

I'm hungry.
Told you we should've had breakfast...
Why can't we just eat now? That Rice Krispie is basically taunting me.
But I don't think eating is allowed in class.
Shouldn't we give it a shot? Our stomach is going to give it away before then anyways...
Hm. Why not I guess.

Fade Out....

~Thank you for your time~
~FantasyOtter12
Lol it was pretty fun writing this...

-Total credit to mindfruit for the idea on the first 'act'-

Have a great day/night/middle of the day/middle of the night :)

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33 Comments
  • ReaganMarie2024

    i love this, you wrote this really well


    14 minutes ago
  • midnight.summerrose

    haha this is just genius and really amusing!! :)
    Can you please tell me what you think of my second draft please? :)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/190872/version/389097


    about 4 hours ago
  • Paisley Blue

    haha omg this is so great!! <3


    about 13 hours ago
  • amazing grace

    so funny XD!


    about 13 hours ago
  • Future Pseudonym

    I've never laughed so hard at a clone of myself before


    about 13 hours ago
  • Stone of Jade

    chapter six of my untitled dystopian is out!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/free_writing/191968/versions/388902


    about 16 hours ago
  • bellairet

    Lmao this is actually hilarious


    about 19 hours ago
  • Stone of Jade

    OH MY WORD I LOVE THIS!!! are you me in another universe or something why do i relate to this so much!! I'm excited to be the 30th like!! haha you deserve each one and a hundred more!


    about 19 hours ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: aww, thank you! Haha, okay, I’ll see if I can think of anything! :)


    about 22 hours ago
  • Beth R.

    re: tysm, lol my pleasure :)
    also... 120 FOLLOWERS? omg i feel like a proud mom lol


    about 23 hours ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Hey, Otter! I wanted to strongly suggest you do a part two of this! I’d REALLY POVE to read a part two (of course, no pressure if you don’t/can’t!) BTW, how’re you?


    about 24 hours ago
  • Lata.B

    Omg this made me laugh hahahahah


    1 day ago
  • Snurrito

    I can totally relate to this, especially the food part! Except, I just go ahead and eat.. (My teachers don't care.)


    1 day ago
  • dovetrees

    reply: ooooh amazing! let me know what you think :")


    1 day ago
  • Landofstories

    HAHAHA THIS. ohmygosh - i have a serious problem when it comes to food and online classes. i can't leave but i can't focus cause i'm so hungry and then it really does become an internal debate lol. ( and the worst part is I DON'T EVEN GET HUNGRY UNTIL CLASS STARTS. ) i'm so sorry rant over - just this piece is super relatable. love it!!


    2 days ago
  • SavannaC!

    Haha, now I’m really glad I’m homeschooled... XD. Now Zoom classes for me!


    2 days ago
  • Tayyaba

    finally i started going to college and got rid of sleepy online classes :))


    2 days ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: :) thanks!


    2 days ago
  • LindytheRavenclaw

    HAHAHAH WHY IS IS THIS SO RELATE ABLE-EVERY SINGLE PART OF IT.. *cries in humiliation* I feel this too deep, especially the "Shrouded in mystery"part because my house lighting sucks XD


    2 days ago
  • Coolgirl2020

    Replying: I KNOW! I'M SO HAPPY! AHHHHHHH! XD SO GLAD WE HAVE TO HAVE OUR MASKS ON BECAUSE I DON'T WANT ANYONE WONDERING WHY I HAVE A GOOFY GRIN ON MY FACE!


    2 days ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: haha, well that probably makes it easier to have the same one! Cool! I’m thinking about changing mine up, but I had to search through my movies to find a good HG pic...........


    2 days ago
  • Coolgirl2020

    Replying: THANKS SO MUCH! *sobs* I HAVE BEEN TRYING TO FIGURE IT OUT FOREVER AND I COULDN'T, THANK YOU!


    2 days ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Ps. I don’t know if I’ve said but I really like your profile picture! Did you take it or get it online or something?


    2 days ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    I just reread this and.......OH GOSH, THIS IS SO FUNNY! I love the light switch part, and the laughing in class part! Ohhhhh, thanks, Otter, I needed that! Also, commenting on Coolgirl2020’s comment: I didn’t know how to do that either until like a week ago! I eventually asked someone too!


    2 days ago
  • Coolgirl2020

    Um, so I noticed that you put pieces back into the mainstream occasionally, but you still have all the likes and comments, and you haven't edited the pieces. Can you tell me how to do that? I've been trying to figure it out, but I can't, so I would love it if you would tell me. Thanks in advance. <3


    2 days ago
  • Zoe N

    lol that just made my day :) thanks, I was laughing the whole time :))


    2 days ago
  • madeline3.14159

    Re: thanks!


    3 days ago
  • Beth R.

    ah i love this so darn much! truly honored that i made it into one of your pieces:)


    3 days ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    This made me laugh harder than is really justified.
    Especially
    "Yea. So what do you suggest we do?
    Panick.
    Ok."
    I am the QUEEN of panic lol. (Well actually I'm the Duchess of Weird, but that's another story)


    3 days ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!


    3 days ago
  • madeline3.14159

    THIS IS AMAZING!!!! I love this so much :)


    3 days ago
  • Coolgirl2020

    LOVE THIS! SO CUTE! XD


    3 days ago
  • ava09

    BAHAHHHAHA THANK YOU!!! This was SOOO much fun to read ahhh and it made me laugh. :))) i LOVE this!!


    3 days ago