kealoha

United States

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novelist
singer/songwriter
artist
wanna be poet
ukulele lover

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heyy! i hope you have a good day :)

70 followers?! are you kidding?! <3

i like to write songs for hours.

trying to put my thoughts and feelings into words.

you can find me listening to TØP, Grace Vanderwaal, or Hollyn. (or whatever other artist i've recently discovered)

"Beauty is not caused. It is."
- Emily Dickenson

g l a s s

September 17, 2020

FREE WRITING

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she used to be clear / crystal / shining brilliantly / no love to dull her / but then you / you daring boy / thought you could caress / a crystal heart / thought you could carry her / but you are foolish / careless with love / so spills shards from your hands / tears from her face / shattered / another glass heart / left to pieces / on marble tile

girls with glass hearts
always seem to fall for boys
who treat them like toys
girls with glass hearts
seem to never be on guard
no, for them it's too hard
oh girls with glass hearts
beware beware

for some seek to stain you

blue / blue / blue

some do not value

you / you / you


  do
        not
                become
                        stained
                                   glass                               


d o n ' t


....instead....just....

hide/behind/your/label
fragile
till/you/realize/you/can/be/more/than
fragile

till you know
that you are
lovely 
by yourself
 
trying different formatting while tossing around this idea. feedback is appreciated! 
i have no idea if this makes sense :P

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2 Comments
  • Paisley Blue

    This is beautiful! Wow! This almost sounds like a song... wonderful piece! Like Doodleninja said, i love the theme of the glass. wow. Awesome poem!!! <3


    3 days ago
  • Doodleninja

    yes this formatting is beautiful and strengthens the piece as a whole! And I understood the message you were telling here; I loved the theme of glass, both stained and crystal clear. Amazing writing! :D


    3 days ago