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This piece was so funny! I almost burst out laughing! It's hilarious how you put in all those little details that are SO TRUE!
I think one thing you could add is their smell. You could say something like, "And if the colors don't scare off the predators, the smell will."
I love this piece! It's very concise, yet very amusing. I can't wait to see the next one! And I definitely think you should add the smell in there because that's such a big part of what socks are.
Anyway, great job! Can't wait to see the next one! :)