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A playful beginning is always nice, maybe being more attentive to detail(highlighted).
Where is she from? Side thought of her background will be prominent in the reader's mind. We know she's an indentured servant, and the master of the home knew her parents. But what about her upbringing? Did she grown in the streets? Were her neighbors always sickly? Did she ever have chicken pox?
What do you see when you write this? What is your tone? Does Christina have a headache?
You're doing great.
Any sentences i highlighted and rewrote, they're merely suggestions, this review is just constructive criticism.