FantasyOtter12

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Rhymes With 'Implode'

September 19, 2020

FREE WRITING

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When you feel like you're about to implode

And your brain cells start to explode

Suddenly your computer wants to reload

You feel like turning everything into a toad

But you have to stay composed

So you just go read a book about someone named 'Frodo'

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-Thank you for your time-
~FantasyOtter12
 
When something gets you supa annoyed but you have to shove down your feelings... XD
~I just wrote this cuz i felt like rhyming-have a good day/night :P

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33 Comments
  • Cher_Herondale

    I love the fun rhymes you do, they are awesome


    7 months ago
  • Cher_Herondale

    I am a rat
    With wings like a bat
    Meet my rat/bat friend Matt
    He doesn't like to chat
    he is better at combat
    but back to me, my name is Kat,
    Yesterday This brat spat
    that is a fact
    I am sorry the ending is flat


    7 months ago
  • ANSON REYNOLDS

    ...
    (is literally crying laughing on the inside bc this is her new favorite thing)
    ...


    8 months ago
  • Deleted User

    I love the Frodo ending! TLOTR rules!(and Legalas, as my sister would say.)


    11 months ago
  • dovetrees

    reply: ahaha i shared the same thoughts :) please do keep updating me!!


    about 1 year ago
  • dovetrees

    reply: thank youu :) && ahh yes! how are you finding it so far?


    about 1 year ago
  • midnight.summerrose

    Re: don’t worry. :) thank you!!


    about 1 year ago
  • Starting Anew! (still Coolgirl though)

    Replying: Yeah, like cognate as in if you take two different languages, such as Spanish or English, and you take "usar" and "use", they look like each other, so they're cognates (at least, I think that's how it works.)


    about 1 year ago
  • Starting Anew! (still Coolgirl though)

    Repying: AHHHHHHHHHHH! You're letting ME choose? I think I just died of excitement!
    Hmm...let me think...I want to pick a word that's not hard to find rhymes for, so...WHAT ABOUT COGNATES? It's a word that I kinda had an experience with today, so if you can, cognates would be my first choice. Second would be obscure and third would be deter (in case the first doesn't work out). Anyway, THANKS SO MUCH! XD I really appreciate this; it's such a huge honor! Will be on the lookout for this piece! Can't wait! <3


    about 1 year ago
  • Rachaelgrace

    This is absolutely fantastic:)


    about 1 year ago
  • Starting Anew! (still Coolgirl though)

    XD THIS CRACKED ME UP! IF I WAS DRINKING MILK, IT WOULDA COME OUT OF MY NOSE! My favorite line "you feel like turning everything into a toad." WHO DOESN'T WHEN THEY'RE HAVING WRITERS' BLOCK?! Only non-writers, that's who! Anyway, LOVE THIS and maybe you could write more like these? I don't know, this just seems really awesome to me and I would love to see another one along these lines. COOLGIRL IS OUT! <3


    about 1 year ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    I love the way it RHYMES!! haha....


    about 1 year ago
  • løne wølf

    "You feel like turning everything into a toad" - omg, same <3


    about 1 year ago
  • midnight.summerrose

    Re: Thank you so much!! This makes me laugh and it's really good!!


    about 1 year ago
  • ~Zoe~

    Re: Thanks so much. I actually just finished my first draft for historical fiction.


    about 1 year ago
  • AmethystsAlias

    Absolutely beautiful <3


    about 1 year ago
  • Lata.B

    Haha this made me smile! Love! :)


    about 1 year ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: thank you!!! :)


    about 1 year ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    And I’m sorry, I apparently don’t know how to do a link on here!!


    about 1 year ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    If you’re really bored, Otter, I’d really love to hear what you think about my piece Three Years! Of course don’t feel like you have to!


    about 1 year ago
  • Cici'sTimes

    And the best part is that all the lines are still in cohesion.


    about 1 year ago
  • Tayyaba

    <3<3<3 :))


    about 1 year ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Haha, I love this! I’m terrible at rhyming, so great job, XD!
    Also, I love how everyone’s freaking out about how you mention Frodo, and then Rohan’s Defender’s like “YOU AREN’T A BIG FAN OF LOTR?!” XD. I mean, it’s good, but I haven’t watched it in such a long time.... I guess I need to watch it again if everyone’s going crazy like this XD.


    about 1 year ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: :D Well, just ask Mindfruit if HG is good, if you haven’t read it. I know he’ll agree with me that it is awesome ! :)


    about 1 year ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: :) AND YOU ARENT A BIG FAN OF LOTR?! Have you seen the movies? They’re really good if you don’t like the books. Have you read Hunger Games? I know you like dystopian.


    about 1 year ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    BTW, I read it to sister who just finished reading LOTR Fellowship, and she said she loves the incorporation of Frodo! :)


    about 1 year ago
  • beth r.

    re: ah thank you so much!!


    about 1 year ago
  • beth r.

    re: thanks so much! lol glad someone got the irked kirk thing


    about 1 year ago
  • Huba Huba

    I love this short piece. Sorry about not being very active on WtW lately. AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVE TOLKIEN'S WORKS MY GOODNESS. I find it so fascinating how he can create such a world we can all escape to when reality gets dull. That last line, may not mean anything to a typical person, but it means so much to people who have read the Lord of the Rings or the Hobbit.


    about 1 year ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    LOVEEEE THISSSS!! FRODO!!!!!! Yessssssss, Otter!! I LOVE LOTR SOOO MUCH!!! This is so amazing


    about 1 year ago
  • BizzleWrites

    I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH!!!!! I can relate to this so much, too. I understand wanting to 'turn everything into a toad'.


    about 1 year ago
  • beth r.

    man your writing speaks to my very soul, dude
    re: thanks for all the comments!


    about 1 year ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    so truuuue haha a book about someone named "Frodo" XD


    about 1 year ago