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14 and gayer than you'll ever be
Broadway nerd
Hopeless romantic

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September 21, 2020

    "Abigail, why would you do this?" Daddy hisses. Mommy says something that I don't hear- she talks quieter than Daddy. I press my ear harder against the door. Daddy is talking again.
    "You know just as well as I that taking in one of her kind is punishable by death."
    "What's her kind?" Mommy asks harshly. She is quiet, but I recognize the tone of her voice. It's the same tone she uses when I forget to clean my room, but so much worse.
   "A Jew," Daddy says, so soft but so angry, and so afraid. That's how I know something is wrong. Daddy is never afraid. He says he has to be strong. He tells me and Mommy we should be strong, too. I will be strong. I will.
    But not right now.
    Instead of waiting to hear what Mommy says next, I turn and run up the stairs to my attic bedroom where Tabitha is waiting for me.
    I push the door open. "Hi, Tabby," I say.
    She whips her head around and drops her necklace from her mouth. Her eyes are wide and fearful, and she's pulled her legs tight to her chest. She looks me up and down, and seems to relax a bit.
    She sighs. "You startled me."
    "Sorry," I reply. She is calmer now- calmer than she was this morning, at least, but her shocking blue eyes seem like they've never known anything other than terror. I've felt bad for her since the very minute I saw her curled up on the side of the street, covered in soot and surrounded by discarded cigarette butts. Mommy felt bad for her too, so we brought her home with us.
    Tabby still isn't happy, though. Maybe I can cheer her up, or at least make her feel more safe and at home.
    "Come here," I urge, and walk over to the window on the other side of the room. Tabby looks surprised, but gets to her knees and follows me over. I push the window open and kneel on the floor next to her, and for a moment we just breathe in the cool night air.
    I scan the night sky. It's a cloudless night, and I can see each and every beautiful star.
    Then I see a special one. "A shooting star!" I exclaim loudly and excitedly. The wind carries my voice into the darkness. I thrust my arm out the window and point out the star, as it quickly makes its way across the sky.
    "Oh..." Tabby mutters and looks at the floor.
    "A shooting star!" I repeat. "Make a wish!" I close my eyes, clasp my hands together, and make mine. Usually I wish for something like a new doll or those pretty purple hair ribbons I was saving my pennies for before the shop got boarded up. But today I wish for something different. Today I wish for Tabby to be safe with us, and for Daddy to not be mad at Mommy anymore. I open my eyes and turn to Tabby expectantly. "Well?"
    "I don't like to wish on stars," she says softly. "Stars are bad."
    I tilt my head in confusion. Stars can't be bad. Stars are bright and amazing and spectacular!
    Tabby reaches for her chest and holds up her necklace. She's always holding it, but I've never really stopped to notice it.
    "It's a Star of David," Tabby explains. "It was a birthday gift from my Mom before she was taken. Now the Nazis use it to tell that I'm a Jew."
    There's that word again. Just like Daddy said it.
    "Stars aren't lucky for me. So I don't wish on them," she finishes.
    I look at her curiously. She doesn't seem freaked out anymore, but her eyes hold something else. Wisdom. We're both only seven, but she's so much wiser than I, or I'll ever be. Even Mommy and Daddy aren't this wise.
    "Why don't you just take it off?" I ask curiously. "The Nazis aren't here now, they can't make you wear it."
    "I guess so," she sighs. "But it was from Mommy."
    "But they'll hurt you if they see it?" She nods. "Then take it off." I say it forcefully. I think I'm being too mean, but I know she needs to.
    Tabby looks like she is going to protest again, but then she nods, unclasps the necklace, and places it into my outstretched hand. I let it sit there for a moment, then close my fist around it.
    In that exact moment there is a loud noise downstairs, and lots of shouting. I hear Mommy and Daddy, and some other men I don't know. Tabby and I exchange terrified glances.
    Tabby reaches for her chest, where her necklace used to rest, and then she remembers that her comfort object isn't there. "Give me the necklace," she pleads, physically shaking.
    "Hide under the bed," I tell her, jumping to my feet.
    "Give me the necklace!" she repeats. I ignore her. I can hear footsteps coming up the stairs now- loud and thumping, not like Mommy or Daddy's. 
    Tabby gives up on trying to get her necklace back, and dives under my bed, pulling my long, white comforter further down behind her. The men are almost at my door.
    I lean down, lift up the covers and peek my head under. Tabby is cowering at the back. "Be strong," I tell her firmly, drop the covers and stand back up.
    The Nazis knock my door down right as I finish clasping Tabby's necklace around my own neck. The shooting star out the window is long gone, but the one around my neck shines bright. A symbol of death for many, but a symbol of hope for me.
    I'm going to be fine, I tell myself. And I'm going to be strong. 
Wow. The idea for this story has been floating around in my head for literally 5 or 6 years. I can't believe I finally had the chance to write it. What do you guys think?? :D

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  • queenie

    re: i think the admins took it down, ;/
    the main synopsis was that, due to jealousy and under the influence of drugs (other than cigarettes) Melody decided to confront Lu and burn her with the tip of her cigarette. Lu looks to Ezra for help, hence chapter nine

    5 months ago
  • queenie

    *i n h a l e s*

    T H A T S M E

    5 months ago
  • queenie

    I saw your profile pic and screamed. Amity is the biggest mood, honestly. Love her. And Luz. Of course. #Lumity

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    Haha omg I just saw the changes you've made to your profile XD the message box is hilarious. Hope you find the perfect girl, love!! :)

    5 months ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    Just amazing!!!! I love this so much!!! That ending!!! Just WOAH!!!! ;)! Love this knew perspective. It is fresh and insightful!

    5 months ago
  • Anlee

    aww this makes me want to cry...good luck in the competition!

    5 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    I'm sorry this took so long, I just finished reviewing this, hopefully, it gets to you soon :)

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    I'll have to check it out! Thanks for the recommendation :)

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    My gosh.
    I love all of those musicals!!!! Also, if you haven't listened to Six, you definitely should. I've also been really into Wicked lately.
    Anyways, hope your day is going well!

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    1- awesome piece. I love your writing.
    2- love your pfp! So cute!!
    3- okay I just read your profile and I relate to SO MUCH of it!!! Im probably a lesbian, a Broadway nerd (!!!), I wrote a book, and I'm a hopeless romantic!!! We are so similar!! :D

    5 months ago
  • mystifiedtulip

    This is awesome. I can't believe how hopeful and meaningful this all sounds, in under 1000 words. What's really coincidental was that I also did my historical fiction piece about the Holocaust too! If you don't mind, could you check out mines as well? Thanks. :)

    5 months ago
  • WitchyKittyKat

    @Zoe N thanks, and of course not! I'll review it right now :)

    5 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    I'll review this today or tomorrow!! Do you mind reviewing my historical fiction piece??

    5 months ago
  • Sanjana Sunilkumar

    This is fantastic! Dropping a review right away!

    5 months ago
  • #Bookworm

    Dude, this is astonishing. I think I've seen this written by someone else before, but this really provides a new perspective on the Holocaust!

    6 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    Wow, It's so powerful. I love it. Great job!!

    6 months ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    This is such a powerful story, the imagery is beautiful and I can feel every beat of it. Amazing job!

    6 months ago
  • AmethystsAlias

    Absolutely beautiful. Inspiring and so painful realistic :)

    6 months ago