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Message to Readers
Re-Published, first written in August
I was surprised that someone could write about pain in such a clear and beautiful way.
I can’t really think of anything that needs to be expanded upon, but if you wanted to go more in-depth on something I think the translucent wall part would be a good place to do so.
I loved this! Sorry I didn’t give you much constructive feedback, but it was hard to find something. Keep up the awesome stuff!