Chloe_Cat

United States

Tired and angsty teen who expresses herself through her words.
A hopeless romantic.
Someone who cherishes the stars.
70's and 80's rock are my true calling.
Ask me what I'm thinking and I will tell you everything.

Message to Readers

This isn't my normal writing style, but the prompt was requested and I couldn't say no. Please tell me what you think.

How I Feel Right Now

November 19, 2020

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Heartbeat increases,
eyes go wide.
He gives me a smile,
I softly sigh.

When he talks passionately,
my world narrows to only him.
The excitement in his eyes,
makes me as happy as I can be.

He called me pretty,
that made me smile.
I don't think he knows,
how much that meant to me.

When he laughs,
I feel such joy.
It's nice to be funny,
one in a while.

I can tell him anything,
he always cares.
He never looks bored,
or gives me a blank stare.

Six feet apart,
is all we can be.
But it's okay,
he still means a lot to me.

When my thoughts are pressing down,
smothering me,
he bats them away,
without even knowing what's bothering me.

What I'm trying to say,
is that I don't think I'm in love,
but if I had to pick anyone?
Of course, I'd choose him.

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6 Comments
  • abby.a

    ahhHHHH i get ittttt... i'm feeling exactly the same except it's a she :))


    9 days ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    You have no idea how hard I'm smiliiing, you're writing is so amazing! :))
    I think that is a masterpiece and there is no better way to describe this feeling... I can really relate to this, maybe that's why I'm smiling :)


    about 1 month ago
  • Gho3t

    heck this is beautiful, I bet this guy would say the same to you if he was as good at writing as you...


    3 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    Replying: U kidding?? 0 plot. Both love interests are abusive and awful. Maas tries SO hard to convince us that Feyre is an angel that it just gets annoying after a while. Her only character trait is that she paints, and we never even find out what she's painting.
    Honestly I could keep ranting, but I wont. I know plenty of people who like the books, I'm just personally super critical. So hey, you be u man.


    3 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    Replying: Oh boy. Don't even get me STARTED on Sara J Maas. I'm sorry, but definitely not my favorite book XD.


    3 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    It's words like these that make me believe in love


    3 months ago