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Message to Readers
✡ A special tribute to those who suffered in the Holocaust ✡
Confidence in your start, that's the greatest quality any writer could show. It takes so much courage to write about something that has scarred humanity for so long, I can't help but admire that factor.
You showcase the part of a youth in this time period well, but I'd like to know more about his internal conflicts. Emphasize hesitation and curiosity, that ending was superb, but it could glisten a little brighter.
Is there any special reason you chose Germany as your subject? Genuinely curious.
I admire the tenacity of your work, I'd actually be really scared to write a piece like this. It's historically accurate, but to write a piece about a character in a time no one will speak of without being faulted, it truly is a gem.
Review for review? :/ You're doing great btw, let me know if you'll write another draft for comment.