JustAnotherDarling

United States

...departed sometime in the autumn...
should you ever need a friend, find me on Wattpad under the same username or at my Instagram: @almostttaesthetic

all my love, and then some more,
JustAnotherDarling

Message to Readers

I...... honestly have got no clue what this is. But I threw some words together and I like a couple of the lines so.... tell me what y'all think :)

I do really want to improve this and give it some bigger meaning, so any/all feedback is greatly appreciated!

Cosmic Love Dies Too

September 23, 2020

FREE WRITING

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starlight is the music that brings love to life.
it falls like the universe's own natural shimmery glitter
and wraps around us in the summer as the sweet sun sets.
yes, that's when our love is ignited -
in those four minutes when the whole world is bathed in gold;
your face glows orange for just three;
our eyes meet for two;
then the last minute ends,
and it's done.
hearts are falling flowers
as the spring departs with a flourish.
my feelings are like white cherry blossoms with pink frosted tips;
they flutter through the air and settle in your hair,
only to be brushed away with a careless sweep of your hands
which then reach out to hold mine.
and your warm hands are all i want;
they're all i need
as we both fall into this endless spiral of love.
snowflakes are shavings of a dead heart
that shatters when the winter is at its coldest,
when, maybe, the love wasn't real
or "true" enough.
if the day was when our love was alive,
it was the shadows that haunted it;
it was the night that killed it,
smothered it with its empty darkness.
if our love was borne out of starlight,
it was a blackhole that swallowed it whole.

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11 Comments
  • ~Zoe N~

    Re: Thank you! and yeah, I'm really trying to do more for the environment right now. I'm glad you like it


    5 months ago
  • AmethystsAlias

    Re: On behalf of the author, thank you! Also, we both can't wait for the final book of the Trials of Apollo to come out! It's practically wrapping up three series!


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: :D Thank you so much!!!! And awww!


    5 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Re: hey I got boba yesterday (Friday) and was thinking of you too! :)


    5 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    Wow! Absolutely speechless! I'm in awe, this is beautiful! wow :)


    5 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Random thing- oh and also the sweet part of me comes from all the sugar in the boba heh ;)


    5 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Re; I think it’s a very nice jumble of words actually <3 XD


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    This is INCREDIBLE! This is some of the best emotional poetry I’ve ever read! Great work!


    5 months ago
  • journal.scribbles

    Love this piece! A review is on the way. :)


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    re: Oh thank you so much! You were the first one who loved it <3


    5 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    WOW this is great!! I'm assuming the lines in bold were your favorite lol. As for your message box, while reading this i was kind of thinking about love and the two of them with the metaphor of "Cosmic Love" and then these three lines really hit home-
    "as we both fall into this endless spiral of love.
    snowflakes are shavings of a dead heart
    that shatters when the winter is at its coldest,"
    And the meaning completely changed for me. Maybe if you dramatize that, maybe make a separate thingy idk. I luv this <3


    5 months ago