waxingcrescents

Canada

"Who in the world am I? Ah, that's the great puzzle." - Lewis Carroll

oh, to live with friends in a renovated french castle with a labyrinth

i write mediocre poetry about love and other lies

she/her

Message to Readers

I don't usually write poetry this long or in this specific style (separated into chunks like this), so let me know what you think. Thanks as always! <3

x i write poetry in the dark x

September 4, 2020

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i write poetry in the dark
so the light cannot judge
the secrets i withhold from myself

x

i write poetry in the dark, because
the brilliance of today's minds
are dampened by constraints of the modern world
we watch friends poison themselves
with second-hand smoke and broken promises
and pretend it helps them heal
you always restrained yourself
i guess we're similar in that way

x

i write poetry in the dark
so the light cannot tell me how
i have made flaws in the mosaic of my outlook
and i can continue dancing with false pretenses
with a smile on my face

x

i write poetry in the dark
so i don't shackle myself
to the person everyone wants me to be
so my feelings can make their grand entrance
all over the page

x

i write poetry in the dark
because frankly i worry
that in the light i would notice how much
i miss you
No, I don't l i t e r a l l y write poetry in the dark. (It's a metaphor.) I don't know if I made that clear enough here, so if I didn't, I'll ensure it's clear in the footnotes.

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3 Comments
  • Paisley Blue

    Beautiful... wow... this is so... amazing! I am stunned <3 really wonderful poem!


    3 months ago
  • rainandsonder

    that second stanza !! this whole thing, really, excellent work!


    3 months ago
  • Dmoral

    wcresent, this extended metaphor is amazing! the opening HAD me and was perhaps my favorite but the ending stole my heart so its hard to pick. beautiful, brilliant work !!


    3 months ago