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I tweaked my dream up a bit to get a message across. How's the narrating?
This has some really beautiful imagery. I especially like the people wearing gold and diamonds because it is vivid, but also just sort of random as many things in dreams are.
I think you could go a bit deeper into the feeling of getting trampled on. How do you feel?
Also yes! I do see people I haven't met in my dreams. Although most of the time I've seen them before, like some random girl from my primary school always appears in my dreams even though I've never talked to her. Anyway great thought provoking piece.