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Everything here is just so well-written. Emotion is depicted wonderfully and just the power in the words hold so much. There can be so much drawn from this, I feel like I can barely grasp onto its full meaning. Truly spectacular!
I think there are definitely enough details for this story. The message is definitely complete, so I would say this whole story is perfect just as it is.
The way you spin your words, the way you let them sink into the reader, is outstanding. But one big thing, was the marvelous ending. The ending almost created a surreal atmosphere. It created the perfect way to end and left me with such a heavy thought. Absolutely amazing!