waxingcrescents

Canada

"Who in the world am I? Ah, that's the great puzzle." - Lewis Carroll

oh, to live with friends in a renovated french castle with a labyrinth

i write mediocre poetry about love and other lies

she/her

Message to Readers

*this is me letting my chaotic brain organize itself into equally chaotic writing*

poison cries

September 2, 2020

FREE WRITING

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lilacs burst from her heart
spill from her mouth
make peace with her eyes
adamantine love
left to the records
gold ink spelling history
onto yellowed parchment
consternation building
from her dreamy lies
and she thought it sweet
that poison cries
Here's a good old word tornado. Lowercase and selective punctuation intended.

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7 Comments
  • Paisley Blue

    wow, amazing! such a delicate poem--and such wonderful word choice!!! awesome!!! <3


    3 months ago
  • Eblinn

    such a pretty poem!


    3 months ago
  • Stumbling Conundrum

    Replying: Thank you so much for your kind words! <3

    Also, love that 'gold ink spelling history' line!


    3 months ago
  • outoftheblue

    "adamantine love
    left to the records
    gold ink spelling history
    onto yellowed parchment" your diction and rhyme scheme is stunning!


    3 months ago
  • Stumbling Conundrum

    Replying: Thank you for your kind words! <3


    3 months ago
  • ek503

    i completely agree with EliathRose. that ending is stunning :)


    3 months ago
  • EliathRose

    That ending, though... it was fantastic!


    3 months ago