beth r.

United States

... just your average, teenage writer

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goodnight, stuff | my take on the children's book goodnight, moon

September 1, 2020

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goodnight, stuff
goodnight, The Office- I think I've had enough.
goodnight, laptop
goodnight, online Etsy shoppe.
goodnight, Whatsapp chat titled "The Squad",
goodnight to even Todd.
goodnight, Netflix
goodnight, Chex Mix.
goodnight to the half drunken water bottle that is forever on my night stand.
goodnight to all the potatoes in the land.


 
hey so for ya'll who don't know, goodnight moon is a poem about a kid saying goodnight to sorta stuff they like/in their surroundings. this is my take lol
yes, i keep chex mix in my room...
now, i challenge YOU to take your favorite childhood story/song/poem, and put your own twist on it.
have fun!!!!

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12 Comments
  • Deleted User

    lol I'm sorry the last line though--AMEN


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Goodnight haha :P Wow the footnotes look weird with the new layout haha


    6 months ago
  • ~madeline~

    This brings on such strong nostalgia!! Love it!


    12 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    HA! I LOVED thoses books when I was little! This is adorable, and your rhymes are great too!


    12 months ago
  • ~Zoe~

    That was my favorite book when I was little, now I and my friends entertain ourselves when we are extremely bored by reading through it with weird accents and trying to find dark meanings behind it lol. love this!


    about 1 year ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    That was cute <3
    Except that "The squad" XD


    about 1 year ago
  • Jo Rejoicing [ChildOfGod]

    XD "Goodnight to all the potatoes in the land"


    about 1 year ago
  • Turkeycracker K (a.ka. Firecracker)

    That's cute! You re-wrote the story to fit your personal interests! I like that!


    about 1 year ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Aahhahahaha This is so funny!!! You have forever changed the way I look at Goodnight Moon and I read that book a TON when I was little... "goodnight, Netflix
    goodnight, Chex Mix." XD


    about 1 year ago
  • Huba Huba

    Replying: Good luck on your etsy shop!


    about 1 year ago
  • Huba Huba

    I love this, it tells a lot about you. Tell me about your Etsy shop, I'll be excited to see it! I've been helping a friend managing hers, and it's called PurpleFishArt!


    about 1 year ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    "goodnight to even Todd" Lol I think Todd is as infamous here as my brother is (or more)


    about 1 year ago