jyemabry04

United States

Message to Readers

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what emotions did you feel
what could i have added

September 1, 2020

FREE WRITING

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can you hear it
 can you hear the rhythm of the drums causing my heart to skip a beat 
can you hear it
can you hear the guitar strumming the melody of my soul
can you hear it
can you hear the piano play the key of love 
can you hear it 
can you hear the artist spilling there soul over the track 
can you hear it 
can you hear the bass directing the emotion of your body as it sways to the beat of the drum
can you hear it 
can you hear your mind playing tricks on you as you move in ways you never imagined

i can hear it

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2 Comments
  • Huba Huba

    I like your repetition.


    about 1 year ago
  • hi i'm jackson ;)

    ooooh i love this! i can so relate! the only thing i have with it is you used the wrong "there," it should've been "their" but otherwise i abSOLUTELY LOVE IT!! Keep writing!!


    about 1 year ago