Samina

India

Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
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Tushar Mandhan, or else I will steal your chocolates :P I don't have words for him.
Pure heart, Mishthi Sharma, V-Rose and EliathRose
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"Paper is more patient than man" ~ Anne Frank
“You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world...but you do have some say in who hurts you. I like my choices.”-John Green
“And in that moment, I swear we were infinite.”-Stephen Chbosky
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dream house

September 8, 2020

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pain painting ink-blue sky crimson red
  laying the building blocks of my dream house
     gently stroking the brush, shades on my canvas
        applying the wetness on my forehead
           monochrome pink into my palette 
               squeeze of yellow
                  walls white, amber chandler
                      closet chestnut brown
                         milk chocolate tiles, furniture burnt coral                                                 
                             stealing the crimson red from the sky giving mirror a touch of scarlet
                                 wine red with white color
                                    every time I see the mirror
                                        reminding me of the pain  
intentional lowercase
The poem starts and ends with the same word. pain











Word count:
first draft:106
second draft: 78
date published:
first draft 31 August 2020
second draft 9-9-2020
 

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5 Comments
  • HelpMe512

    heyo! the next Mental Health Matters is up!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/190540/version/385585
    please let me know if you don't want to be notified anymore


    about 2 months ago
  • HelpMe512

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/190391/version/385298
    Mental Health Matters 14 is up!
    so sorry that it's a little late, but i explained it in the footnotes


    about 2 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    Replying: thanks!
    And let's buy only one cake and share XD


    about 2 months ago
  • EliathRose

    The formatting is so beautiful! And the starting and ending with the same word is also really cool. I love this!


    about 2 months ago
  • Pavithra C.P

    Beautiful!


    about 2 months ago