ChocolateKiwi

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I’m Kiara,
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Active since June 2, 2020

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Anyways to improve this is appreciated! I hope this is what the prompt meant. Please tell me what you think, and any titles ideas too!

I See The Future

August 30, 2020

PROMPT: The Unseen

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I see it,
But you don't.
I see the stars in the night sky.
While you see the clouds hiding the sun.
I see the smile upon their face.
While you see the sadness.
I see the trees colored as they used to be.
While you see the still dried up leaves.
I see the water sparkling.
While you see water still polluted.  
I see people going to school.
While you see people scrounging for food. 
I see handshakes going all around.
While you see fighting and arguing. 
I see animals that have a home.
While you see forests being cut down. 
I see medicine for cancer.
While you see people dying.
I see the future,
While you see now. 
 
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  • Huba Huba

    This was an enjoyable piece to read! I liked your repetition.


    about 1 year ago