nolite te bastardes carborundorum
vive la revolution
any feedback would be highly appreciated
- love Rosie
Written By: Love, Rose
August 29, 2020
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I feel like the footnote is just as poetic as the piece! I love the metaphor; it's so thought-provoking!
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This is short, but so, so powerful. It is amazing how you can fit that much feeling into 1 sentence!
Starting Anew! (still Coolgirl though)
Replying: Your welcome. :)
Huba Huba - thank you for the comment x
I love the abstractness of your piece and your way of language!
Blue owl - thank you so much for taking the time to write this comment I really appreciate - you raise an interesting point which I haven't considered so thank you again.
Hey! One of the things I love about WtW is that it connects you to people from around the globe who may think the exact same things as you do. You've put into beautiful words someting that crosses my mind from time to time, but I never bothered to think about it too much.
Since the poem is so short, I hope you don't mind if I write a comment instead of a review: the only thing I'd advise you to change is the "your". I'd tell you to erase it since you don't refer to a second person a second time, and it makes the opposition between "today" and "tomorrow" more clear.
I hope this was helpful and I apologize in case I was rude. Great poem :)
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