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There was a ton of good dialogue and backstory and really drew me in. Now I want to know a lot more! Your word choice was also really good and demonstrated maximum impact with a minimum amount of space.
So much! I want to know where and what and why Rose went. I want to know what happened to cause that. Why Sabrina blames herself. I'm also wondering if roses will make more of an appearance. They seem like an awesome symbol to use to set the tone and elude what will happen next.
Beautiful job! Overall, this piece was very entertaining to read and I really loved it! I really want you to think about the rose symbol thing because that can be a very powerful tool for you to use later on in the story. Anyway... awesome job and keep writing! <3 <3 <3