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I really loved this piece! It was really encouraging and inspirational. Good job! You used some really powerful and moving sentences. I loved the technique of repetition you used to reinforce your ideas.
Something I think that would make this even better is if you added some other techniques like metaphors, similes and alliteration? Also something I think would be cool is to start the poem kind of sad, like with the paragraph that says "i'm scared to start school alone". You could then get the poem more uplifting as you go along? This is just a suggestion you could try out?
This was a wonderful poem: uplifting and enjoyable to read. Nice work! Also, you should make it a series! It's amazing!