FantasyOtter12

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Love dystopian fiction!
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*Est. 7/6/20*
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~Joined with best friends jztpenguin and mindfruit!!

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~Son of Poseidon (Apparently. I guess it fits cuz...sea otters. Hm)

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Friends are your anchor

September 7, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Friends are your anchors

Grounding you

Because if you float up too high

You might get lost

It could be a good thing to get lost in the clouds

To have a safe haven forever

But if you float up too high

You...could get hit by an airplane

Thank you for your time

~FantasyOtter12
See this is another one that started out deep and then just went splat. Like if you were hit by an airplane. Although I kind of like the extended meaning of it. Hm. 

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18 Comments
  • thea_ivy

    Truest thing I’ve read all week, loved it! :)


    8 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: thank you, Otter! It was such an amazing idea! Thank you so much! #Otterfam!


    8 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    I can officially say I am proud to be part of the OtterFam.... Love This XD


    9 months ago
  • Rachaelgrace

    I love the surprise of the end! :)


    9 months ago
  • Landofstories

    replying: ofc, i always love your pieces :) <3


    9 months ago
  • Landofstories

    Bahaha, this made me burst out laughing, your pieces always make my day, so thank you!!! I love how this is deep and thoughtful and then becomes comical while still leaving us thinking even after it's done. i can't breatheee lol!


    9 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Bahaha! Love it! And so true. About the anchors. And the plane part xD


    9 months ago
  • birthdaycandles

    Ahahahaha the last line is particularly poetic lol, nice work!


    9 months ago
  • TwentyOneTimelords

    I laughed so hard when I read the last line...that came out of nowhere XD

    Also, a book rec: one of my absolute favorite series is called "The Great Library" by Rachel Caine. It's an alternate history/dystopian series, and it needs more appreciation!


    9 months ago
  • WrenWrites

    I love thisssss omggggggg i wasn't expecting that aaaaaa


    9 months ago
  • ~madeline~

    I love the way it combines the deep message with the comical last lines. (Im not sure if deep is the right word for this poem... maybe high?) Love your work!


    9 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    Love it love it love it!! Last two lines are funny! But it gives a wonderful message too, to never leave your friends. <3


    9 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    I love this!! I loved the airplane part! I didn’t see it coming! GREAT as always, Otter! ;)


    9 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    wow love this
    Also the message slis so true I wouldn't be who I am without my friends <3


    9 months ago
  • BlueOwl

    this is totally me in my English assignments lol
    Initially, I thought you were going for an "Icarus approach" (comparison rather), but the plane sounds great LOL


    9 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Love this! It's deep but also funny XD!


    9 months ago
  • bookmagic

    Amazing, I'm beginning to grow addicted to your work. So, do friends hold you down. Perhaps they bring you down. It is just as important for a friend to be supporter as it is for them to be an anchor.


    9 months ago
  • mindfruit

    Haha, love this! Especially those last two lines "You...could get hit by an airplane/ Thank you for your time"


    9 months ago