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WOW! this whole piece is delight! It's every line says something, this tells a wonderful story! I love every single line of it. So beautifully written and really a nice concept. Word choice is incredible and imagery is spectacular! It's short but lovely. I always love these kind of pieces. I can even imagine this. I'm in love with this. At first it made me speechless.
This piece is perfect in my point of View. COMPLETE!! Great job, amazing piece. Keep writing <3