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the whole piece moved me a lot because i feel like this character sometimes. i feel like i would be better if i changed to fit society’s mold, but it help me realize that being different is what makes you you.
Not much i can think of for this one. i think this piece was extremely thorough and thought out
i’m in love with this passage so much! you are extremely talented and i can’t wait to read your next piece.