Below, you'll see any text that was highlighted with comments from the reviewer.
Wow, that first stanza blew me away! It is so vivid and emotional--the whole piece is! Simply stunning!
Well, maybe if you added something about who was lost or how they were lost? I really don't know. It is both perfect the way it is and longing to be longer. I think whatever you choose will be right!
This is such a heartfelt and emotional poem! I absolutely love this. Your word choice is so beautiful and sad. Wonderful piece! Happy writing! <3