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Message to Readers
I apoligize for not publishing any work, I've been working on this chapter. This chapter may not be as interesting, but as the book goes on it gets juicy! This is a romance book and is going to be part of a series. Have fun reading! Comment below if you enjoyed or things maybe to change or predictions!!! P.S if you give me a shoutout or invite someone to check out this story, comment that and how many times or people and I will do the same for you. We are all writers who should support one another!
I loved the characters the writer has created and the vivid descriptions of the setting throughout the story.
I can’t wait to see how the writer in later chapters in able to show sophie’s struggle to adapt to her new life and how she will overcome it. To deepen an idea, just as I said in the highlights i was a bit confused about the towels.
i can’t wait to continue to read on! for some reason, i usually hate the beginnings of movies and books, but this beginning was very interesting and captured my attention the whole way through. also, i think there may have been some grammar mistakes throughout the piece, but that is not my strongest area lol (i always fail my grammar tests in english, oops) so i left those because i didn’t want to give you the wrong information. please notify me when chapter 2 comes out i can’t wait!