Paisley Blue

United States

she/they | minnesotan
INFP-T, lesbian, christian
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est. June 2, 2020

absolutely in love with words
theater geek and musician
trying to spread kindness and love and all that jazz <3

tell me what's on your mind
:)

Message from Writer

Ongoing series:
~ The Mountain and Back (with Lexi Birken) ~
~ Queerly Beloved (with sunshinebaby) ~
~Listening Through The Static (poetry collection) ~

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Currently reading: Leaves of Grass, by Walt Whitman

"And I will show that nothing can happen more beautiful than death,
And I will thread a thread through my poems that time and event are compact,
And that all the things of the universe are perfect miracles, each as profound as any."
-Song of Myself (Leaves of Grass, Walt Whitman)

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Making my way through this world, trying to help as many people as I can.

leave it all behind

August 27, 2020

FREE WRITING

13
red and black raspberries
adorning the jagged edges
of my childhood
leaving sickly-sweet stains
on my memories
the smell of overripe sorrow
fermenting and filling
all the cracks
pry the remains
from the bottom of my shoe
leaving dark patches
that I try to forget
focus on the ripe berry and
not the thorns

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11 Comments
  • Future Pseudonym

    Replying: You welcome girl *thumbs up* We love Sal around here


    3 months ago
  • Future Pseudonym

    Getting some Walk Two Moons deja vu. I demand a reprint starring this poem *goes out to buy a pitchfork*


    3 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Hey awesome person! Here's another chapter of Flying on Broken Wings. I hope you like it!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/187646/version/379395


    3 months ago
  • rainandsonder

    the sensory details here are really fantastic! love blackberries, this reminds me of my childhood too tbh.


    3 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Here is another chapter for Flying on Broken Wings.
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/187392/version/378804


    3 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Wow! I really like this! Every part of this I just saw it happening in my mind! :)


    3 months ago
  • Century Friend

    The imagery. Just wow. It's a fairly short poem, and yet you convey so much emotion.
    "the smell of overripe sorrow/fermenting and filling/all the cracks" – absolutely beautiful.


    3 months ago
  • beth r.

    love this!!


    3 months ago
  • abby.a

    “Leaving dark patches, that I try to forget, focus on the ripe berry, and not the thorns” amazing lines!! This is so good!


    3 months ago
  • books4life

    amazing! :)


    3 months ago
  • dovetrees

    amazing! once again, this is such an amazing piece :)


    3 months ago