I'm about done.
I just would like some feedback on if this writing flowed very well and made sense or was it choppy?
Written By: Elise Clift
May 17, 2015
She had a great figure and a certain perkiness that most guys couldn't resist. The way she moved even got the guys attention. She didn't move like just anyone. She moved like a queen, as if the ground were clouds. She was the queen of the school. There was never a moment where there wasn't a smile on her face. She was my best friend and everyone's idol. That was Gretchen. I'm just in her shadows. I was fine with it, until she got a boyfriend.