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A short penny for your thoughts! I love thinking about words ;)
Any feedback would be great, or you can just tell me how you're doing today.
It's a vibrant piece. I never really thought about the word Dear so deeply and ever since I read this piece I've begun to question the letters I write. The repetition of the word Dear adds a very classic touch which a generally a poem renders. It's insightful, it's meaningful and I really love your writing style, which I see is a little mysterious yet the gist is hidden somewhat in plain sight.
I believe in secure messages being imparted in a few words, and you did just that. Your title leads into the story, so maybe write a little about for whom the word Dear is worth. Or at a minimal level, what type of person deserves it? I crave to know a more positive side to the gist, but people and even you may differ—just a minimal touch. Your piece otherwise is perfect. Also, 'dominated the stationery market' could replace 'dominated the market for stationery.'
Let me know if this review is worth writing back with a thank you 'dear'! :) Have a great day!