Peer Review by EdilMayHampsen (United States)

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Questioning Ourselves

By: SunnySides


PROMPT: Beyond Reason

Now what makes the dark thunderstorms
So utterly gloomy in this present day?
Who first braved the wild horse,
And placed a saddle on his mighty back?
How does Mother Nature call us
Back into her outstretched arms?
Why can't peace be spread not from nations, 
But from the hearts of the kindest souls?


Peer Review

The last question is my favorite.


It challenges the expectation of government to do good, encouraging individuals to seek justice and, I assume, make larger-scale change.


Reviewer Comments

Welcome to WTW! I love how you approached this prompt, with all the questions that feel tied together but are each deeply and distinct. Great work, can't wait to see more!