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Does this show who the character is? I’m trying to write a novel and this is the main characters backpack. Any suggestions?

Lilly Among Roses (lily’s backpack)

October 4, 2020

PROMPT: Inventory

Lily Among:


In her backpack her dad had it made each on special for her and her twin sister Rose:

A pencil case, that has all different writing things.

A photo of her and her dad eating ice cream.

A blue notebook full of writing.

A water bottle half empty.

A algebra book with loose papers sticking out and sticky notes.

A little notebook with a lock on it, inside of it is all her secrets.

A phone with only five contacts. one of which hasn’t been used in over a year. 

A schedule that doesn’t match her sister’s.

And her lunch money. 



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