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This is such a powerful metaphor for feeling like an outsider! Every word of this story created an atmosphere of fear and desperation, and your prose elevated it to a new level. Great work!
There seems to be two interpretations of this story- in my first reading, I believed the narrator was in a literal glass box, but upon my second reading it feels more like a metaphor. The story works both ways.
I'm a bit confused by the phrase "creates hope" in the first line. This isn't necessarily a criticism, but I'd love to know the context behind it.
Overall, I really enjoyed this story. The narration is full of emotion and your imagery is haunting.
Aside from an excess of commas in certain places, I really liked your writing style!