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This is my final so please give me feedback! Is the pacing good? Can you understand the themes? Is the syntax too jarring? Anything that seemed contrived? I'm not a great writer and I always look to improve off of others' suggestions, so thanks for your efforts!!!
Written By: Gryffin
August 16, 2020
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020
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Century Friend
So human. You really delved into the character's life and the people in it. Awesome job, and good luck in the competition!