ek503

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kintsugi, but the gold won't stick

August 13, 2020

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they say / “careful, your cracks are / showing” / I know / so kind of you to / notice. / it’s hard / but come and take a look inside. / do you see / the words carved on the roof of my / mouth? / do you see / them straining to flow / out? / do you see / the cracks / yawning? / and do you read the words as they tumble / down? / so kind of you to / notice. / so / so / kind of you to notice. / but / but / I don’t think you did. / I know / I know / my cracks / are showing / and they’re not painted gold. / (they’re not pretty, I know.) / but inside / inside / look closer and find / there are words plastered bold / beneath my shattered kintsugi / smile. /

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9 Comments
  • dovetrees

    reply: thank you so much <3 really appreciate it :D also, what a gorgeous piece! i love it :)


    3 months ago
  • BlueWolf

    It's so strong, bold and unique! I love the message! Beautifully written!!!


    3 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Chapter 16 of Death's Tales!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/187283/version/378540


    3 months ago
  • journal.scribbles

    This is so beautiful! I love how you fractured each sentence. It really emphasizes the theme of cracks.


    3 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Death's Tales has another chapter!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/186425/version/376530


    3 months ago
  • Dmoral

    see, SOFT POETRY that's so beautiful and eye-opening and just, caresses your ever so kindly. "my cracks / are showing / and they’re not painted gold." & "there are words plastered bold / beneath my shattered kintsugi / smile. /" favorite lines, gosh i did love this whole piece tho


    3 months ago
  • outoftheblue

    ashdgakshjd i really must catch up on your work


    3 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    This is truly stunning


    3 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    This is so beautiful!!! Amazing writing <3


    3 months ago