ILikeToWriteThings

United States

Message to Readers

This is the first draft for the Flash Fiction competition, any and all feedback will be met with gratitude and hugs!
Is it clear that the narrator is dead in a casket? Is it clear that the casket closes when the story ends? Is there anything I should add or omit?

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August 13, 2020

Far past the circle of heads in my peripheral lies the bright sky. I know these faces but cannot recall the persons behind them. “Do I know you?” My lips do not move. Why do they all cry? 
The moon is out, and still I feel the light thump of tears beating upon my chest. Wait, where are they going now? Why is it suddenly black?

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