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The title was an eyecatcher for me just because I knew the story would most likely be about self doubt, which is something everyone has faced.
The part when she puts on this jacket of self-doubt was very well written in my opinion, and was something I think everyone has done at some point.
The "Better versions of herself" bit was good, but if possible I feel like more could be explained as to why she's seeing herself and not blank faces.
This is really good and honestly brought back some suppressed embarrassment haha, but I'm all here for it. The fact that you were able make me feel something using description of the setting, is great!
Overall great work! I'm actually new to WTW and would really appreciate some feedback as well.