Erron

United Kingdom

hi, I am Erron and I’m from the UK. I’m 13 and I want to write a book in the future.

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My new house

August 15, 2020

My new house is by the big blue sea, but it’s not as good as my old home. That one was by a dingy alleyway !

My new house means we can get a new puppy, but it’s not as good as my old home. That one had a family of raccoons who would nibble my fingers!

My new house has a big garden with vegetables  ,but it’s not as good as my old home. That one had lots of stinging nettles !

I still like my new house though, it’s just not as good as my old home!

 

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2 Comments
  • JazzMinnelli

    Nice story! Try fixing the punctuation a bit; that might help make your piece look cleaner. Good luck with writing your story! :)


    3 months ago
  • Rachaelgrace

    This is a really interesting piece! It makes the reader want to know more.


    3 months ago