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would love comments!
I loved the writing style. It reminded me of the book The Mysterious Benedict Society by Trenton Lee Stewart. This has such description for characters and actions in a way that isn’t too heavy. It makes me want to keep reading.
I loved the lines that really made me think (they’re highlighted) so I wouldn’t complain if there were more of those, but those of course, aren’t needed.
You told this story amazingly and I’m itching to read more of your work. Good job.