Samina

India

Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
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Poet????

Message to Readers

the edited version also I am suffering from block so the additions suck
anyways, I came up with an idea of ' what are the side-effects of falling in love with a poet?'
so if I get 20 likes then I am going for it.

So for those who asked from where is this inspired.
It's a blend of real-life and my dreams. out of blue, I came up with this line which I loved a lot (but what if I fell in love with a poet). I starting collecting all my one-liners and came up with this. Thanks Mishthi for inspiring and helping me with it.
P.S. there will be a collaboration piece with Mishthi coming soon!
Feedbacks are appreciated. Please comment on the sequel.

but what if I fell in love with a poet? (Edited and please read the message box!!)

September 18, 2020

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But what if I fall in love with a poet?
Poet and poetess
Isn't it a dangerous couple
If he brings stars for me
Then shall I get the ocean for him?
Isn't poetry crazy?
If he personifies my voice as honey
I will compare his voice to the pitter-patter of rain,
Soothing/cooling

We both will write with our inks flowing from nerve
And threads from his poetic heart connects mine.

I breathe his words in my breath
Each word is breathtaking

But what if I fell in love with a poet
And we write in the moonlight
The sight
Of a poet and poetess
Writing the world in their lines.
Each letter filled with love.

But what If I fell in love with a poet?
We lay back on the terrace
Gazing the night sky, shining glistening upon us.
With our books and pen in hand.
Ink is not merely to write but
But what if I fell in love with a poet?
 
But what if I fell in love with a poet?
Poets are dangerous 
Including my smile, midnight eye
In his dreamy simile
Cinematic are his metaphors
He writes hyperbole my rough hair as smooth silky,
using it as a simile for soft fur.
He using my laugh as rhyme
mine looking good as a crime
but what if I fell in love with a poet?

This poetess is also 
Dangerous 
Remembering his hair, wave, 
In my bliss
His presence is 
Stardust in enchanted rain  
I will exaggerate his wink
As thunder in my chest
alliterated his flawless flirting 
And closeness as clouds 
Pouring love in life
He'll bring the arc of vivid colors in my life
But what if I feel in love with a poet?

When my mood is off
Neither do I want flowers nor chocolate
I just want you pearly lips to recite me a sonnet
or your special Shayari 
Your knitted sweater of words on my back
But what if I feel in love with a poet?

I want you to take me 
on a date with you and your diary
On my terrace
Escaping the reality
Take me on a tour to a magical world
Entry in your poems
And I will show you stars on my lips
With mine poetry
then
I fell in love with you,
also the poet!
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date published 11-8-2020

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18 Comments
  • xXlunagirlXx

    Wow... It's loving, yet gentle, I love it!


    1 day ago
  • BlueWolf476

    This is just amazing. I am falling in love with your poetry. Just captivating with every line!!!!!!


    2 days ago
  • Coolgirl2020

    Love this! Is this based on a true story or something? 'Cause that would be super cool! Also, good job with the repetition! Not many can pull it off like you did!


    7 days ago
  • Abby.a

    dang!! this is sooooo well written!! it’s beautiful!


    18 days ago
  • Stumbling Conundrum

    Oh that last stanza tho! Bravo, brava, bravisima! <3


    18 days ago
  • BlueWolf476

    Ahhh!!!!!!!!! Love it so much words can't even begin to describe it!!! NEED SEQUEL!!!!


    25 days ago
  • Beth R.

    omygosh this is gorgeous!
    replying: thanks so much for all the comments!


    26 days ago
  • rainydayz

    omg i love this so much!


    26 days ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    I love this piece of yours so much!! And I'm waiting for the sequel, impatiently :D


    27 days ago
  • Alex S

    I love this piece so much! Its cunning, thought out and heart warming at the same time.


    27 days ago
  • Smruti Swarupa Mahapatra

    Finallyyyy!!!!!! Waited for it for so long. So satisfactory. Keep it up and waiting for the sequel


    about 1 month ago
  • Halopoet

    Replying: sure no problem


    about 1 month ago
  • Halopoet

    I loveeeeeee the imagery and basically everything about this poem and i'd love to continue this from the guy's pov,though it might take some time. Lemme know if that's alright.


    about 1 month ago
  • Bhavya's Treasure

    Indeed it's heartwarming!
    I hope the transition from fell to feel is intentional and not a typo. Also, in the fifth stanza, 'simile' has been repeated twice. If you could edit it... But that's just a suggestion. Overall, it's enchanting. :)


    about 1 month ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Y-E-S write a sequel!!!!!! Let me know when you do!! :D


    about 1 month ago
  • EliathRose

    Yes, I love it!


    about 1 month ago
  • V-Rose

    Please, please, please write a sequel. Please.


    about 1 month ago
  • Paisley Blue

    So good! Your additions are perfect. I love this poem!!! You should definitely write a sequel!!!


    about 1 month ago