Samina

India

Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
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Poet????

Message to Readers

Anyway, I came up with the idea of ' what are the side-effects of falling in love with a poet?'
so if I get 50 likes then I am going for it.
I HAVE REPUBLISHED IT AFTER FEW MONTHS, IDK MAN I DON'T GET ATTENTION ON WTW THESE DAYS..

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but what if I fell in love with a poet? ( please read the message box!!)

November 19, 2020

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But what if I fall in love with a poet?
Poet and poetess
Isn't it a dangerous couple
If he brings stars for me
Then shall I get the ocean for him?
Isn't poetry crazy?
If he personifies my voice as honey
I will compare his voice to the pitter-patter of rain,
Soothing/cooling

We both will write with our inks flowing from nerve
And threads from his poetic heart connects mine.

I breathe his words in my breath
Each word is breathtaking

But what if I fell in love with a poet
And we write in the moonlight
The sight
Of a poet and poetess
Writing the world in their lines.
Each letter filled with love.

But what If I fell in love with a poet?
We lay back on the terrace
Gazing the night sky, shining glistening upon us.
With our books and pen in hand.
Ink is not merely to write but
But what if I fell in love with a poet?
 
But what if I fell in love with a poet?
Poets are dangerous 
Including my smile, midnight eye
In his dreamy simile
Cinematic are his metaphors
He writes hyperbole my rough hair as smooth silky,
using it as a simile for soft fur.
He using my laugh as rhyme
mine looking good as a crime
but what if I fell in love with a poet?

This poetess is also 
Dangerous 
Remembering his hair, wave, 
In my bliss
His presence is 
Stardust in enchanted rain  
I will exaggerate his wink
As thunder in my chest
alliterated his flawless flirting 
And closeness as clouds 
Pouring love in life
He'll bring the arc of vivid colors in my life
But what if I feel in love with a poet?

When my mood is off
Neither do I want flowers nor chocolate
I just want you pearly lips to recite me a sonnet
or your special Shayari 
Your knitted sweater of words on my back
But what if I feel in love with a poet?

I want you to take me 
on a date with you and your diary
On my terrace
Escaping the reality
Take me on a tour to a magical world
Entry in your poems
And I will show you stars on my lips
With mine poetry
then
I fell in love with you,
also the poet!
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date published 11-8-2020

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24 Comments
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Oohhhh, please do your idea!!!


    6 months ago
  • mystifiedtulip

    oMG THIS EXPRESSES MORE THAN ONE COULD IMAGINE....ok.....go FOR IT! <333


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Wow, this is gorgeous!!!


    8 months ago
  • kealoha

    OH MY WORD
    i love this concept so much, this is so gorgeous. aaah, i loooove it :) <3


    8 months ago
  • buddingauthor

    Ah! This is so good, wow! I was smiling with every line, the way you framed this, and the concept as a whole...oh my God, wow! I absolutely love it!!


    8 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Absolutely love it Sam!


    8 months ago
  • xXlunagirlXx

    Wow... It's loving, yet gentle, I love it!


    8 months ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    This is just amazing. I am falling in love with your poetry. Just captivating with every line!!!!!!


    8 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Love this! Is this based on a true story or something? 'Cause that would be super cool! Also, good job with the repetition! Not many can pull it off like you did!


    8 months ago
  • pyrrhic

    dang!! this is sooooo well written!! it’s beautiful!


    8 months ago
  • Stumbling Conundrum

    Oh that last stanza tho! Bravo, brava, bravisima! <3


    8 months ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    Ahhh!!!!!!!!! Love it so much words can't even begin to describe it!!! NEED SEQUEL!!!!


    9 months ago
  • beth r.

    omygosh this is gorgeous!
    replying: thanks so much for all the comments!


    9 months ago
  • rainydayz

    omg i love this so much!


    9 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    I love this piece of yours so much!! And I'm waiting for the sequel, impatiently :D


    9 months ago
  • Alex S

    I love this piece so much! Its cunning, thought out and heart warming at the same time.


    9 months ago
  • Smruti Swarupa Mahapatra

    Finallyyyy!!!!!! Waited for it for so long. So satisfactory. Keep it up and waiting for the sequel


    9 months ago
  • Halopoet

    Replying: sure no problem


    9 months ago
  • Halopoet

    I loveeeeeee the imagery and basically everything about this poem and i'd love to continue this from the guy's pov,though it might take some time. Lemme know if that's alright.


    9 months ago
  • Bhavya's Treasure

    Indeed it's heartwarming!
    I hope the transition from fell to feel is intentional and not a typo. Also, in the fifth stanza, 'simile' has been repeated twice. If you could edit it... But that's just a suggestion. Overall, it's enchanting. :)


    9 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Y-E-S write a sequel!!!!!! Let me know when you do!! :D


    9 months ago
  • EliathRose

    Yes, I love it!


    9 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Please, please, please write a sequel. Please.


    9 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    So good! Your additions are perfect. I love this poem!!! You should definitely write a sequel!!!


    9 months ago