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aye. give me your heart so i may lead it softly. enfp, sarang
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Written By: tragicbirthday
September 14, 2020
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madeline3.14159
This is such a touching piece!! The thing that I loved the most about it is the length. Sometime shorter is better.
rainydayz
“Because the gravity of life has pushed me down” this is so brilliant
Jasmine khawar
Woah!! This is amazing and beautiful. So real and kinda simple.
Wisp
I literally feel that line "Ugly tears" because it's so true. Oh gosh, this piece is absolutely riveting and so real. I love how you didn't try to cover things up with fancy poetry, you just said it like it was. Beautiful!
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madeline3.14159
This is such a touching piece!! The thing that I loved the most about it is the length. Sometime shorter is better.
rainydayz
“Because the gravity of life has pushed me down” this is so brilliant
Jasmine khawar
Woah!! This is amazing and beautiful. So real and kinda simple.
Wisp
I literally feel that line "Ugly tears" because it's so true. Oh gosh, this piece is absolutely riveting and so real. I love how you didn't try to cover things up with fancy poetry, you just said it like it was. Beautiful!