tragicbirthday

United States

aye.
give me your heart so i may lead it softly.
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how difficult :/ -poem

September 14, 2020

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And I, am on the ground
Because I am crying
Ugly tears

And I, am on the ground
Because the gravity of life has pushed me down

And I, am on the ground
Because I, could no longer handle 
The curse of living

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4 Comments
  • madeline3.14159

    This is such a touching piece!! The thing that I loved the most about it is the length. Sometime shorter is better.


    6 months ago
  • rainydayz

    “Because the gravity of life has pushed me down” this is so brilliant


    6 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    Woah!! This is amazing and beautiful. So real and kinda simple.


    7 months ago
  • Wisp

    I literally feel that line "Ugly tears" because it's so true. Oh gosh, this piece is absolutely riveting and so real. I love how you didn't try to cover things up with fancy poetry, you just said it like it was. Beautiful!


    7 months ago