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I like the little vignette. It was cute. You really wrote a story in under 100 words and I commend you for it. You perfectly executed the prompt flash fiction prompt.
Perhaps try modifying your sentences. The way that you're relaying information gets a little repetitive. You form most of your sentences like this: (subject, usually the "I")-(verb)-(complement). It can make for a boring read. And I think that you can change this format or even replace those sentences with descriptions of details or focusing on imagery. Try planting in a little mystery in there.
You successfully left no questions needing to be answered. I'm not confused, the story was clear and easy to follow.
You have done such a good job of writing a story in under a hundred words. That isn't easy and I think that you should give yourself a pat on the back for the amount of editing you must've done. Great work!!
I liked your story. I encourage you to keep on writing!! :)