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So I tried to be funny but I’m not sure how successful I was. Any tips or improvements would be greatly needed and appreciated ✌️
I hope you enjoy it and if not then thanks for reading it anyway :)
This is an epic portrayal of writer's block. There couldn't have been a piece of writing more relevant. I love every word like it's my best friend. You used writer's block to write something that definitely is a piece of writing that flows, makes you laugh, and in the end, makes you think.
So you imagine tea bags and coffee beans as characters? And are you talking to your brain? That would put things in perspective, although the answer to the first question is pretty obvious, haha.
I just can't stop reading this over a million times. I would suggest no sequels, though- leave it at the point where you can't think of anything but tea bags. And be a great writer someday. That's that. Of course, it's your wish!:)