asphyxiated

Canada

ethnically jewish.
she/her
leo sun
cancer moon
pisces rising

i enjoy sharing my work and helping others grow as writers. please take the time to read some of my work and tell me what you think! i will gladly do the same back.

Message to Readers

Please review this if you have a chance!

My Friend Naomi

August 9, 2020

“Naomi! Come play!”

The window was frosted with a thick film of dust and grime. I could hardly see her, but I knew she was in there- I could hear her crying. Two years thinking I knew somebody, and the truth turned out to be just as ugly and dispiriting as the mold growing on the walls of her bedroom. 

My heart pounded savagely as I turned away. Though I was only a child, I quickly realized how lucky I was. I ran home as fast as I could, but I had nothing to run from. Naomi did.

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3 Comments
  • rainandsonder

    just submitted a review on this! :)


    5 months ago
  • poetri

    oh dear christ if this doesn't win wtw and i gonna have beef one last time <3


    5 months ago
  • Arby

    This is beautiful.


    5 months ago