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Message to Readers
This is Draft 2. Do you like it?! Thank you so much to Ava09 for the extremely helpful review. You guys are so great to me!
I love the raw emotion of this piece. It takes a lot of guts to put your heart out there like that and describe it in such a vivid way. I really admire that aspect of this writing.
You were very thorough in this piece. The few place you may want to expand on are in the highlighted parts, but it’s definitely not necessary.
I’m so glad I got the chance to read this. It was such a beautiful and descriptive piece to describe the heartbreak you went through losing a friend. Please keep me updated with anything with this if you decide to post another draft later on down the line. :)