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Message to Readers
This is my first draft, personally I'm quite proud with how it came out but I welcome all feedback and suggestions! Thanks for reading, have a nice day :)
The amazing imagery used in your writing got me hooked from start to end. I'm not a fan of tragedies or horror stories, but I really liked what you've written. Reminds me of a Sherlock episode :).
You've made use of the word limit to convey your ideas in strong and powerful images and words, instead of long descriptions. You've chosen your words carefully, and I have to say that the element of drama in your story made the scenario a very strong impression on me.
Maybe you could tell the reader why he deserved death? Just a suggestion, so you don't have to. :)
Keep writing, and if possible please do develop your story a bit more so that you could provide the reader with an inside story to the scene. :)
Great work! Keep improving your story!