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Can't believe that I wrote two poems in fifteen minutes! This is just one of them :)
I loved the rhyme! I have a soft spot for rhymes, and yours hit home. :) I also really loved how you gave the impression of you being unaffected by what others do, no matter how harsh, and the fact that you can't be defeated. I love this!
It would be great if you could write a few more stanzas, but I have to say that this is one of the most appealing and perfect pieces that I have ever come across.
I just loved this piece. With every line the tension was growing and I was totally rooting for you, even if you aren't going through these right now (I hope). The experience was so real. Hats off to you! Amazing piece. Keep up the good work!