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I as drawn to this flash story by the title: The Empty Bird Feeder. An empty bird feeder can be a good thing, and a normal thing. However, the first lines indicate something much more ominous.
Definitely! I read this and had an 'Oh My God' moment. We weren't exactly told Luna ate her bird, but the ominous way it's written lets us know that that may be the case. We are made to infer this fact, which makes the text more interesting.
Not really, this was a very well-written piece, with such an amazing story-line.
This is almost perfect! When I read it, I raced upstairs to show my sister how amazing it is!