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Message to Readers
Do you ever have a moment when all of the sudden, a line, or an idea just appears out of know where and you're like,
"Hold the phone, I have to write this down,"? That's what this poem was for me.
I hope you like it, it means alot to me.
I loved how the piece begins with the person hopeless and transitions well into them learning to believe in themselves.
I would like to know more about what exactly the character is facing. Maybe elaborate more on the first 2 stanzas. Just hint a little on what's going on, since poetry doesn't have to be specific. What made them lose hope? Is the person lost or are they dying?
I like the flow of the poem. The title works really well with the piece. It's well written and expresses a lot of emotion. Great job! I think a little elaboration on what exactly the person is overcoming would be good.