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Message to Readers
(The title is definitely not me forgetting to replace it with something that actually made sense with the piece)
I really liked the way you set the scene -- the descriptions are so beautifully vivid.
The second paragraph was particularly powerful. It showed the toxicity of the environment as well as how safe Vera is from all the poisonous fumes, looking down at them in her safe haven.
The last line sounded great, however, it didn't make as much sense as I'd want it to. Maybe you could improve that a bit?
It would be great if you could explain the last line more; I had trouble understanding it. But, if you think your reader should understand what you've said, you wouldn't have to change it. :)
Great job! Keep up the good work.